"Desiderata" by Max Ehrmann
(1927): Analysis of a Philosophical Prose Poem About Mindful Living
The poem “Desiderata” is an excellent
focus for mindful meditation.
Max Ehrmann’s poem,
"Desiderata," is a didactic poem, which he wrote for his daughter. It
contains practical advice for day-to-day life, moral and religious philosophy,
and ethics.
Go placidly amid the noise and haste,
and remember what peace there may be in silence.
As far as possible, without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.
Speak your truth quietly and clearly; and listen to others,
even to the dull and ignorant; they too have their story.
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Advice to remain calm amongst the bustle of everyday life and to practice silence. Be on good terms with people without giving up personal values and assertiveness. Do not be argumentative but remain calm in interactions with others, to whom you should be respectful and attentive, even if you consider a person to be dull or ignorant. Everyone has a right to be heard.
Avoid loud and aggressive persons, they are vexations to the spirit.
If you compare yourself with others, you may become vain and bitter,
for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself.
Enjoy your achievements as well as your plans.
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Avoid people who are loud and aggressive, as they may upset your equilibrium. It is unproductive to compare yourself to other people as there will always be those higher and lower in the pecking order/moral stakes. Any such comparisons are therefore likely to lead to vanity or bitterness. Simply enjoy your own achievements in life and any plans that you may have for furthering your own personal development.
Keep interested in your own career, however humble;
it is a real possession in the changing fortunes of time.
Exercise caution in your business affairs, for the world is full of trickery.
But let this not blind you to what virtue there is;
many persons strive for high ideals,
and everywhere life is full of heroism.
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Whatever your occupation, treasure it and do your best, as it is better to be employed, however humble the work might be, than to be unemployed. Be grateful that you have employment. Be cautious when conducting financial transactions because many people will attempt to dupe you. But despite the fact that there are many fraudsters and con-men don't become blind to the fact that there are also many good people, who have high moral standards. There are heroes in every walk of life.
Be yourself. Especially do not feign affection. Neither be cynical about love;
for in the face of all aridity and disenchantment it is as perennial as the
grass.
Take kindly the counsel of the years, gracefully surrendering the things of
youth.
Nurture strength of spirit to shield you in sudden misfortune.
But do not distress yourself with dark imaginings.
Many fears are born of fatigue and loneliness.
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Don't pretend to be the type of person that you are not, or to have feelings that you do not have. Most of all do not pretend to love a person when there is no love in your heart. But do not underestimate the power of love, which survives in the most terrible of circumstances. Defer to the wisdom of the older generation. Develop a strong character that will help you to survive misfortune, but don't imagine bad things that may never happen - you may be thinking of such things because you are tired or lonely.
Beyond a wholesome discipline, be gentle with yourself.
You are a child of the universe no less than the trees and the stars;
you have a right to be here. And whether or not it is clear to you,
no doubt the universe is unfolding as it should.
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Don't be overly self-critical.You are part of an all-encompassing universe and no less important than any other component within it. You may not realise this, but there is a pre-determined and right path that the universe is following.
Therefore be at peace with God, whatever you conceive Him to be.
And whatever your labors and aspirations, in the noisy confusion of life,
keep peace with your soul. With all its sham, drudgery and broken dreams,
it is still a beautiful world. Be cheerful. Strive to be happy.
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Accept of the reality of God, or a greater
power than human, whatever you imagine 'Him' to be. Maintain a clear
conscience. Despite all of the dreadful things that happen, the world is still
beautiful. Remain cheerful and, most of all, put your best efforts into being
happy.
Questions & Answers
Question: What is Desiderata all
about?
Answer: Desiderata is,
fundamentally, advice about how to live a happy and contented life.
Question: Is the word
"desiderata" Latin or Spanish?
Answer: The word
"desiderata" is Latin. It is the plural of the word
"desideratum," as shown in the callout box in the article.
Question: Of what significance
is the perennial grass mentioned in the fourth stanza of the poem
"Desiderata"?
Answer: The reference to grass
uses the literary device of simile (drawing comparisons to show similarities
between different things). I suppose that Ehrmann is suggesting that just as
grass is green throughout the year in a temperate climate love is
perpetual/undying/fresh. Personally, I don't find it a particularly effective
choice of simile (especially as much of the grass here in England died back
during the recent drought). What do you think?
Question: In what ways did
Ehrmann take a formalistic approach to Desiderata?
Answer: Desiderata is written as
a prose poem. The principal approach that Ehrmann has taken to form is the use
of parataxis, an explanation of which in this article. He has given equal
importance to each point of advice that he has given by using the coordinating
conjunction ‘and’ to link clauses in the poem.
Question: What is the mood of
the poem "Desiderata" by Max Ehrmann?
Answer: Max Ehrmann wrote this
poem to his daughter. It is didactic ie. intended to teach. I would say that it
is both practical and moral in mood.
Question: What is the title of "Desiderata"?
Answer: The title is
"Desiderata"!
Question: What is the message of
Desiderata?
Answer: Max Ehrman wrote
Desiderata with his daughter at the forefront of his mind but the poem contains
advice that can be used to advantage by everyone. Fundamentally, the message is
about how to get through life happily, in a contented manner, and with a clear
conscience. The poem is about how to conduct oneself in the best possible way
in order to achieve these goals, It speaks of remaining calm, being polite, listening
to the point of view of others, avoiding quarrels and those people who like to
create them, and how to stand by one's principles in an assertive but
non-aggressive manner. We should be mindful of not comparing ourselves to other
people because if we do so the outcome will either be vanity or dissatisfaction
with our own lives. We should make time to enjoy our achievements as opposed to
constantly looking ahead to the next goal - in the words of John Lennon ' Life
is what happens while you are busy making plans'.
Question: In the poem
"Desiderata", does the phrase "perennial as the grass"
simply mean that it comes and goes?
Answer: No. Something that is
perennial lasts for a very long time. A perennial plant, such as grass, does
not die for many years. It is a hardy plant that may hibernate during the
winter but it starts to grow again when Spring arrives. In the context of
"Desiderata", the word perennial means everlasting.
Question: Is
"Desiderata" an acronym?
Answer: No. The word desiderata
is not an acronym. You will find the translation of the word from the Latin in
the article. (An acronym is formed from the first letter of other words).
Question: What is the theme of
the poem "Desiderata"?
Answer: The theme of the poem
Desiderata is the authentic lifestyle, which involves - loving oneself, being
true to oneself, valuing one's employment, being dignified and self-assertive,
without being disrespectful to others.
Question: What is the setting of
"Desiderata"?
Answer: I assume that by the
term setting you mean a location in time and/or place. There is no setting in
Desiderata.
Question: What is the mood of
the poem "Desiderata"?
Answer: Mood and tone in poetry
are closely connected and sometimes cause confusion because they both deal with
the emotions cantered around the poem.
The tone of a poem relates to the
intentions of the poet/voice in the poem. Desiderata were written by Ehrmann
specifically for his daughter and the tone is clearly didactic - intended to
provide good objective advice - but is gentle rather than firm.
The mood of a poem relates to the
atmosphere of a poem, and to some extent, the feelings that it arouses in a
reader. Some of the adjectives that I might choose to describe the mood of
Desiderata are - calm, contemplative, peaceful, thoughtful, and enlightened. A
different reader might interpret it differently -perhaps dependent upon the
extent to which s/he is willing to accept advice.
Question: Are there couplets,
tercet, quatrains, and enjambment in the poem Desiderata? If yes, what are
those?
Answer: The short answer to this
question is 'No'. Poetry is most often thought of as a structured literary
form. The patterns of couplets, tercts and quatrains and device of enjambment
that are referred to in this question are structural poetic devices.
However, Desiderata is a prose poem.
The form of this type of poem when first seen on a page, may at first glance
lead to an impression that the text is prose, as it does not have the rhymes
and metrical rhythms usually associated with poetry. The defining feature
however, of a prose poem is that the text includes one or more poetic
techniques and so, essentially, sounds like poetry.
Couplets, tercets and quatrains are
unlikely occurrences in prose poems, which are usually written in sentences and
paragraphs - as is Desiderata.. Enjambment is a technique in which the idea in
a line is carried through to the following line, or lines, without punctuation
at the end of lines. This technique might sometimes be used in prose poems but
you will notice that each line in Desiderata ends with a punctuation mark -
each line makes complete sense and is a self-contained thought.
The main technique employed in
Desiderata is repeated parataxis, which is described in my article.
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